Writing a Hidden Future

This article outlines the influences and challenges I faced while writing Edge of Time, and the Lifespan trilogy as a whole. I thought I’d share it now, in the lead-up to release in June.

One of my favourite movies as a child was a time travel romance called Somewhere in Time. It stars the late Christopher Reeve (think Clark Kent without the glasses) and is embarrassingly corny now that I look back, but the reason my sister and I kept renting that worn old video cassette wasn’t the romance, it was the origin of the pocket watch.

Early in the piece, an elderly Jane Seymour hands Reeve an old pocket watch, which he carries when he travels backwards in time and, in turn, gives to a younger Seymour. This creates a causal loop – the watch is never built and never ‘ends’ – one of the paradoxes cited as proof that time travel is impossible and, worse, possibly a plot flaw.

Thirty years later, the risks of causal loops were at the forefront of my mind while I was developing a time travel trilogy for young adults. It wasn’t just important to me that the story was authentic in terms of character journey, it also had to be solid in terms of social structures and the ‘rules’ of this fictional world.

For a start, I’d read enough scientific journals to know that time travel forwards is possible, at least in a relative sense, so I carried that kernel of truth into the year 2084 when three teenagers discover a skill that lies dormant in all humans. By practising a mediation technique, they learn how to re-locate themselves in time.

The catch: they are only able to jump forwards, not back.

My husband and I lived in Footscray before moving our young family to regional Victoria in 2004, so I already knew the shock of returning to a familiar place only to find buildings sprung up overnight or children grown tall in the blink of an eye. Without actually naming Melbourne, I set key events in Footscray Park, Swanston ‘Boulevard’, the State Library. Even the experience of ‘time jumping’ was inspired by a common everyday occurrence: sleep.

In effect, I picked up the solid line that is the world around me, and carried the dots into a fictional future.

As a nod to the brain-melting fun of causal loops, I decided that information could indeed travel backwards. Physical objects may be governed by time’s arrow, but truth is eternal.

From this idea sprung a future where everyone is microchipped: infinitely useful as a storytelling device, since characters are able to see events from the past on ‘the grid’. In terms of future-building, a whole social structure blossomed from those microchips – food shortages have led to a ration system; chipped citizens are able to access food, education and technology, while unchipped illegals struggle to survive.

Clearly, I was also writing a future affected by climate change, even though I’d never set out to do so. But this new development also provided me with best antagonist I’ve ever had the privilege to write – neither good nor evil, but intrinsic to our survival: the natural environment.

The first two books in the trilogy deal with storms, a blackout, drought, food security and water shortages, as well as two versions of a bushfire (it’s a time travel story set in Victoria, after all). By the time I’d begun to develop the final instalment, images of Swanston St flooded by seawater began to play in my imagination. I kept seeing the Flinders St clock tower above the peaks of waves. The opening scenes even saw characters hiding in massive water-stained drains.

My problem was, none of the scientific predictions see those images as remotely likely. Even when following the ‘high end scenario’ shown on the Australian Government’s ‘Geoscience Australia’ website, sea levels in the year 2100 might reach 110 cm – the banks of the Yarra River will get a bit wider, but few nearby properties are under threat.

Contrast this with ‘The 100 Metre Line’ blog, which shows impacts of sea levels rising 80 m – the whole Melbourne CBD is under water, Port Phillip Bay extends as far north as Hurstbridge. It’s a confronting sight. At least, it would be if it were an accurate prediction.

The reality of sea level rise is that while low-lying islands face genuine threat, most city encroachment is expected to occur gradually enough for us to respond, but search google images with ‘sea level rise city’, and you’ll find artists’ impressions of skyscrapers rising above blue seas: images that have sprung from a collective fear of the impacts of climate change. They’re not reflections of present-day science, but the present-day zeitgeist.

When I think back to our childhood fascination with the pocket watch, it wasn’t about scientific inauthenticity or plot flaws, it was because the watch helped us see the world in new ways. It made us shiver with possibility: what if that were real …

So I allowed the story to guide me. I was, after all, writing fiction so I was free to push beyond the boundaries.

I’m glad I did. Once our city has been submerged, our fictional future doesn’t face complete environmental breakdown, but instead emerges into images of regeneration. Even the social structures shift; characters who once wielded power are now forced to work with others in order to survive. From my fears of death and destruction have come signs of hope, resilience and renewal.

The story may not be as scientifically accurate as I’d hoped, but that’s okay. I realise now that it wasn’t a scientific truth I was exploring, but an emotional one.

I’m looking forward hearing how readers of the first two books respond to the final instalment – one in particular, my sister.

Originally published in The Victorian Writer magazine.

 

Dealing with dead ends and doubt

Dead-ends and doubt are inevitable parts of the creative process. Some of my favourite plot twists have even grown out of the worst of my creative struggles.
My solutions for pushing through usually involve:

• a walk or run
• researching semi-related scientific facts about time, sleep, biology, the cosmos
• jotting down themes and emotions and linking them with doodles and ideas
• doing the vacuuming (surprisingly productive).

But the main way I keep going is by picturing a future point when I’m out the other side. With the Lifespan of Starlight trilogy, it’s been the moment when I could hold all three books in my hands – when all three parts of Scout’s story have been told.

Author copies of Edge of Time arrived today. Such a good feeling. Finally, this day has arrived.

A cover

Edge of Time has a cover! It's interesting to compare it with the initial cover concept ideas I sent to the publisher at the start - both in terms of the differences and  the similarities. I think it's my favourite in the Lifespan of Starlight trilogy. (And just wait until you see all three spines lined up in a row ...)

Artist residency

Today is the final work day of my artist residency with Jacky Winter Gardens and I'm finding one scene in my novel frustratingly difficult to resolve. I can feel its truth hovering just out of my reach, and can't find a clear way to hold onto it. But this sort of struggle is part of the creative process so I can accept the frustration. My time here has reminded me that insights take time - such as the symbolic waterline. When you first walk into the house, a seemingly minor element framing the space is a midnight blue skirting board - it's a block of colour that stays the same level as you descend the stairs into the sitting room (the blue stripe is around knee high here) and finally down to the bedroom at the lowest level, where it's about waist height and level with the bed. The effect is like wading into a deepening ocean as you move through the house - a symbolic descent into your own subconscious, or perhaps creative spirit. It's one of my favourite aspects of the house. And I didn't even notice it until I'd been here for three days.

Artist residency 2

While working on the Lifespan trilogy, I've grown increasingly aware of my relationship with time. After all, it is a time travel story. While working here in the studio at Jacky Winter Gardens, I've found myself slowing down - reading existing scenes on paper rather than on screen, and writing new scenes by hand rather than typing - both slower, more contemplative ways of working. It's as if the house itself is helping me to soften, to sit and consider. What a precious gift - a softening of time.

Artist residency 3

Just arrived for an artist residency at beautiful Jacky Winter Gardens but instead of reading through my manuscript l find myself reading about the wallpaper instead. Everything here, even this gorgeous wallpaper by Marc Martin, has been carefully chosen. The effect is a sense of pure balance, between art and function, between nature and technology, and between solitude and the many artists who have spent time here. What an amazing place.

Real-world inspiration

Like many writers I do my best thinking while out for a walk or a run so here are some images from one of my regular routes: trees that fell during the 2016 floods in northeast Victoria.

It's probably no surprise that images of environmental breakdown kept feeding into the final instalment of the Lifespan trilogy, which I was developing at the time.

Books, however, take long months to write so I was still writing about dust storms and floods while the mud on my running path had long eased into the earth; tiny blue wrens would flit around to pick insects out of the massive root balls of fallen trees. It was the natural regeneration along the route that helped me see I wasn't just writing about environmental collapse but also about the resilience of the natural world.

The final image shows a section of the path that was completely submerged during the floods, which now has a healthy clump of grass growing through concrete. It often makes me smile as I pass - nature pushing through the cracks of human 'civilisation'.
It speaks to me of resilience and, ultimately, of hope.

March 2017

The 'extras' file

I've just submitted the first draft of Edge of Time (Lifespan trilogy, book 3), so thought I'd post about my rewriting process. The word count circled in yellow is the file I just submitted, and the word count circled in red is from a file I call 'Extras' - essentially, it's all the sentences and scenes I've deleted while writing (it's my way of dealing with the frustration of needing to rewrite something I've worked over for days).

The point I'm trying to make is that writing, for me at least, is a process of trial and error, it's a lot of gut feel, and it takes work. It took me 135,000 words in total to end up with less than 60,000 decent ones, and this is even before the editing process has begun. I should add, too, that a lot of the ideas in the 'Extras' file are effectively stepping stones, they helped me find the magic - or the truth, if you like - in the final story.

If you're an aspiring writer - don't lose heart if your first draft isn't perfect. They never are. Keep rewriting, keep believing in the story until it's the best you can make it. And, perhaps, save all your deleted scenes in a file of their own - that way, they're not gone forever, they're just saved for another day.

February 2017

Book 3: Final instalment coming in 2018

Here's an update about the final instalment of the Lifespan of Starlight trilogy: it's due for release in June 2018, and the working title is Edge of Time. It's a long time to wait, so I thought I'd count down the months til release date with updates about my process as a writer, as well as insights into my inspiration behind the trilogy.

First up - counting down from 10 - here are a couple of images I sent through as ideas to brief the cover designer. It will need to be converted into the series style of 'line-drawing between stars' so we're not sure if it will work with Scout being front-on but I like the panic/energy behind this stock photo, so I think it's worth a try.
This is just the beginning, but who knows what the final cover image will be ...